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I think the poem is kinda like opposite to its title. The title is Rainfall but your poem is about a lack of rain, which is contradictory. I don't think that's supposed to be. It isn't very long, so there aren't any other mistakes to point out. Nice try!]]> Poems Tue, 15 Jul 2008 06:40:04 GMT http://linebyline.darkbb.com/poems-f12/rainfall-waywithwords-t22.htm#65 http://linebyline.darkbb.com/poems-f12/rainfall-waywithwords-t22.htm