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Subject: Excerpts (lol sian)
Thu Jul 31, 2008 8:31 pm
I see that you're not done yet, but I'll start the critique thread anyway.
First, "succinct" is spelled wrongly. Yes, I see you've edited it.
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Subject: Re: Excerpts (lol sian)
Wed Sep 17, 2008 8:46 pm
fine... mistake corrected... nowadays FREAKIN busy le...
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