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PostSubject: Excerpts (lol sian)   Excerpts (lol sian) I_icon_minitimeThu Jul 31, 2008 9:31 pm
I see that you're not done yet, but I'll start the critique thread anyway.

First, "succinct" is spelled wrongly. Yes, I see you've edited it.
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PostSubject: Re: Excerpts (lol sian)   Excerpts (lol sian) I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 17, 2008 9:46 pm
fine... mistake corrected... nowadays FREAKIN busy le...
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